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节日的思念
宣城田斌
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PostPosted: 2008-03-17 20:40:28    Post subject: 节日的思念 Reply with quote

节日的思念

田 斌

总在节日到来之前 你便能抵达
梦中的家乡 其实思念
早在故乡熟悉的小路上奔跑
田野里的庄稼 打着手语
像是深情的召唤
记忆泛起 许多童年的往事
历历在目 像是
儿时的伙伴 唤你乳名
一股暖流涌遍心际

这个时候 思念穿过黑夜的尽头
通往家乡的路 被黎明的脚步踩响
踩成一张小小的车票
被一只溢满汗渍的手
揣在兜里 上面熟悉的字
灼烫目光 风在窗外掠过
像是谁依门翘首的巴望
将低矮温暖的家门早早打开




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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 01:56:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

第一节中叙述的句子多些,第二节中有很好的意象表达。
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