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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 06:10:55    Post subject: 枯竭(外二) Reply with quote

《枯竭》

村头的玉米垛越堆越大
田野的机井越挖越深
我越来越深信
幸福来源于水

坟墓里那么多,没有
汁液的身体。他们
活着的时候,是一条鱼

《夏夜》

蛙把整个湖面都敲破了
草丛中,不时有小型的战斗机
飞进飞出,蓝色的探照灯
忽明忽暗。在月亮下乘凉的人们
她们的影子,晃动着扇子
有气无力

《一群小蚂蚁》

春天,一只蚂蚁爬了出来
两只蚂蚁爬了出来
三只蚂蚁爬了出来......
它们好奇的样子,绝对
不是去年那群老蚂蚁
就像那群刚刚走出站台的人
他们扛着被子,十七八岁的样子
东看看,西瞧瞧。他们以为
城市和乡下一样
到处都可以找到粮食
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 07:47:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

前后两首关照现实,第一首最从意境和象征意义来说最好~欣赏学习!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 18:12:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
前后两首关照现实,第一首最从意境和象征意义来说最好~欣赏学习!

给明月老师问好。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 18:25:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

《一群小蚂蚁》

春天,一只蚂蚁爬了出来
两只蚂蚁爬了出来
三只蚂蚁爬了出来
它们好奇的样子,绝对
不是去年那群老蚂蚁
就像那群刚r刚走出站台的人
他t们扛着被子,十七八岁的样子
东看看,西瞧瞧。他们以为
城市和乡下一样
到 生处都可以找到粮食

很欣赏!愿意乘坐你的列车-------呜
灰尘如蚁
能够永远扛着行李
就是我的幸福

我是藏在你行李中的
蚂蚁

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PostPosted: 2008-03-19 04:18:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

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《一群小蚂蚁》
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PostPosted: 2008-03-19 04:51:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

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半溪明月 wrote:
前后两首关照现实,第一首最从意境和象征意义来说最好~欣赏学习!

给明月老师问好。

你是我的老师~ Smile
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