悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-24 07:41:10 Post subject: 远离开花的日子 |
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远离开花的日子
沉睡的梦,在寒江的冷月里漂浮
四面是隐隐的茫然与空旷
思念拧出的雨水,隔着存在与虚无
孤立无助
把朝云暮霞凝固
任歌声铃声,在风里突兀
我努力地视而不见听而不闻
失水的紫罗兰,让阳光黯然无语
是谁想强留那一抹涩苦
我们相隔有多远
千里万里
还是薄如蝉翼,寸心可触
你的一个吻一个轻抚
便可轻易打碎我艰辛营造的沉静
其实我并不知道怎样
独自守候一地的星光,问候黎明
03/24/2008 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-03-24 07:53:10 Post subject: |
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好诗,喜欢!
等时间,追一个。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-24 08:15:05 Post subject: |
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搬张椅子坐着,看起来悠闲些。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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啥么 秀才

Joined: 10 Jan 2008 Posts: 169
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Posted: 2008-03-24 08:41:13 Post subject: |
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黎明最是匆忙时~ _________________ 这有点麻烦 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-24 09:05:53 Post subject: 有缘不用追~, 慢慢来 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-24 09:06:55 Post subject: 你还是在地上趴着吧~ 别出声 |
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詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
搬张椅子坐着,看起来悠闲些。 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-24 09:15:12 Post subject: 搬张椅子坐着~(ZT) |
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合心 秀才

Joined: 03 Feb 2008 Posts: 122 Location: 山西太原 合心Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-24 15:08:17 Post subject: |
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其实我并不知道怎样
独自守候一地的星光,问候黎明
即将升起的黎明
定是源于另一半的海底  _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-25 05:42:42 Post subject: 嗯,源于另一半的海底。 问好合心。 |
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