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远离开花的日子
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 07:41:10    Post subject: 远离开花的日子 Reply with quote


远离开花的日子
沉睡的梦,在寒江的冷月里漂浮
四面是隐隐的茫然与空旷
思念拧出的雨水,隔着存在与虚无
孤立无助

把朝云暮霞凝固
任歌声铃声,在风里突兀
我努力地视而不见听而不闻
失水的紫罗兰,让阳光黯然无语
是谁想强留那一抹涩苦

我们相隔有多远
千里万里
还是薄如蝉翼,寸心可触
你的一个吻一个轻抚
便可轻易打碎我艰辛营造的沉静

其实我并不知道怎样
独自守候一地的星光,问候黎明

03/24/2008
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 07:53:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
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好诗,喜欢!

等时间,追一个。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 08:15:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

搬张椅子坐着,看起来悠闲些。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 08:41:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

黎明最是匆忙时~
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 09:05:53    Post subject: 有缘不用追~, 慢慢来 Reply with quote

是有缘 wrote:
悠子 wrote:
远离开花的日子
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好诗,喜欢!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 09:06:55    Post subject: 你还是在地上趴着吧~ 别出声 Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
搬张椅子坐着,看起来悠闲些。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 09:15:12    Post subject: 搬张椅子坐着~(ZT) Reply with quote

啥么 wrote:
黎明最是匆忙时~
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 15:08:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

其实我并不知道怎样
独自守候一地的星光,问候黎明

即将升起的黎明
定是源于另一半的海底 Smile
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PostPosted: 2008-03-25 05:42:42    Post subject: 嗯,源于另一半的海底。 问好合心。 Reply with quote

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