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Posted: 2008-03-09 09:53:17 Post subject: 穿过熏衣草的紫色

穿过熏衣草的紫色打开花叶遮掩的矜持容你的影子，灼穿一些时光如何才能，用半生的等待用一种无法调和的色彩轻描一份缘深，淡写几缕意长其实，我们不必去赶玫瑰的约会或是百合的现场如果在这一片绿草如茵种三分秋月，植半亩沧桑穿过熏衣草的紫色放弃对誓言和承诺的臆想一束纤细的守望缀满花苞，任它随意开出浓的或是淡的沁香 03/09/2008

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Posted: 2008-03-09 11:33:40 Post subject:

美哎～～～偶只能在美中叹liao～～～ _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-03-09 11:59:17 Post subject: 美哎～～～

第一次闻到薰衣草的味道，就猜想这花是怎样的模样？这花，长得真不招摇！可是它的颜色、香味，及至整片花海，给人们带来的美好，不输给任一花种。 lavender _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-09 12:33:13 Post subject: 美哎～～～这幅也画的好。

您看那紫色的熏衣草，一束束纤细的守望。悠子的画工可以媲美那谁谁谁。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-09 13:46:16 Post subject: Re: 美哎～～～

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

第一次闻到薰衣草的味道，就猜想这花是怎样的模样？

这花，长得真不招摇！可是它的颜色、香味，及至整片花海，给人们带来的美好，不输给任一花种。

lavender

偶是想谢你写的这一段，好做引子啦。

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Posted: 2008-03-09 13:47:04 Post subject: Re: 美哎～～～这幅也画的好。

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

您看那紫色的熏衣草，一束束纤细的守望。悠子的画工可以媲美那谁谁谁。

悠子的画工可以媲美那照相机啦

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Posted: 2008-03-09 14:08:59 Post subject: 照相机！

悠子 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

您看那紫色的熏衣草，一束束纤细的守望。悠子的画工可以媲美那谁谁谁。

悠子的画工可以媲美那照相机啦

这位画家我知道！这是十五世纪初在中欧小国：列之敦士登，出生的一位画家。也是这个国家的国宝级画家。其画作与实物近似度不相上下，堪称一代大师级人物！
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Posted: 2008-03-09 14:23:37 Post subject:

很美。很细腻。前三段都很顺。。第四段似乎有点绕~~~还是懂了。。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-03-09 14:43:49 Post subject: Re: 很美。很细腻。前三段都很顺。。第四段...

红袖添乱 wrote:

第四段
似乎有点绕~~~还是懂了。。

嗯，略去一句，可好些?

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Posted: 2008-03-09 14:46:29 Post subject: Re: 很美。很细腻。前三段都很顺。。第四段...

悠子 wrote:

红袖添乱 wrote:

第四段
似乎有点绕~~~还是懂了。。

嗯，略去一句，可好些?

还好有个“随意”不然，那地老天荒就和前面有些矛盾。。

灼有点儿热。。你的很温的，

那么快就去掉拉~~
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Posted: 2008-03-09 14:51:17 Post subject:

可我喜欢原来的第二句呀，，没啦？？改地老天荒试试看~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-03-09 16:01:07 Post subject:

谢袖子。先暂时这样吧。最后一句不满意. 让儿子搅得心烦~

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Posted: 2008-03-09 16:59:37 Post subject:

穿过熏衣草的紫色奇妙的句子 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-03-09 17:06:32 Post subject: Re: 穿过熏衣草的紫色奇妙的句子

啥么 wrote:

穿过熏衣草的紫色
奇妙的句子

别奇妙了，帮忙呀~~

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Posted: 2008-03-10 00:46:06 Post subject:

我觉得挺好的：语言、诗意。。。执着、淡定。。。

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Posted: 2008-03-10 08:26:45 Post subject:

一个字:美！两个字:唯美！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-10 08:44:55 Post subject:

三个字: 茉儿好!

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Posted: 2008-03-10 11:53:37 Post subject:

四个字！每每美美。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-10 11:59:21 Post subject:

五个字：是什么意思？

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Posted: 2008-03-10 12:06:13 Post subject:

六个字：每美每每美美。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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