合心 秀才

Joined: 03 Feb 2008 Posts: 122 Location: 山西太原 合心Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-06 07:08:19 Post subject: 《同台》 |
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《同台》
灯光下,生旦净末丑
你是哪个?
叠一纸苍白
皱折中将风吞咽
怎样才能酿一壶清醇
与你把盏临风
醉天,天醉
笑红尘 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金 |
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苏茉儿 秀才
Joined: 31 Dec 2007 Posts: 739
苏茉儿Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-06 12:11:23 Post subject: |
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合心好!
第一句我不是很懂,期待你有时间解释一下。
笑红尘,很喜欢! _________________ 默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-06 16:30:05 Post subject: |
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台上卖力,台下卖命。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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合心 秀才

Joined: 03 Feb 2008 Posts: 122 Location: 山西太原 合心Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-08 17:21:43 Post subject: |
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“灯光下,生旦净末丑”
人生如一个大戏台啊 抱抱茉儿  _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金 |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-08 18:25:25 Post subject: |
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怎样才能酿一壶清醇
与你把盏临风
醉天,天醉
笑红尘 .....意境悠远. |
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苏茉儿 秀才
Joined: 31 Dec 2007 Posts: 739
苏茉儿Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-08 19:22:11 Post subject: Re: “灯光下,生旦净末丑”人生如一个大戏台啊... |
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合心 wrote: |
“灯光下,生旦净末丑”
人生如一个大戏台啊 抱抱茉儿  |
哎哟微,你说我怎么这么二儿泥。。。。。
整明白了。哈,,,,见笑!谢谢合心! _________________ 默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。 |
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合心 秀才

Joined: 03 Feb 2008 Posts: 122 Location: 山西太原 合心Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-08 21:06:06 Post subject: |
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灯灭了,我在黑暗中醒着 ......
呵呵,甭一直醒着哈,有时得闭会儿呢,别让眼睑累着( 玩笑了) _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金 |
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合心 秀才

Joined: 03 Feb 2008 Posts: 122 Location: 山西太原 合心Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-08 21:08:08 Post subject: Re: 台上卖力,台下卖命。 |
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什么都不卖 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-09 05:07:04 Post subject: Re: 怎样才能酿一壶清醇 与你把盏临风 醉天,... |
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赵福治 wrote: |
怎样才能酿一壶清醇
与你把盏临风
醉天,天醉
笑红尘 .....意境悠远. |
哇!赵老大!您有两米高吧? _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-09 05:08:42 Post subject: Re: 台上卖力,台下卖命。 |
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合心 wrote: |
什么都不卖 |
什么都有,什么都卖,什么都不奇怪!YAHOO~ _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-10 01:08:10 Post subject: |
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喜欢扣题的最后一节。 |
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