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《同台》
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PostPosted: 2008-03-06 07:08:19    Post subject: 《同台》 Reply with quote

《同台》

灯光下,生旦净末丑
你是哪个?
叠一纸苍白
皱折中将风吞咽

怎样才能酿一壶清醇
与你把盏临风
醉天,天醉
笑红尘

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PostPosted: 2008-03-06 12:11:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

合心好!
第一句我不是很懂,期待你有时间解释一下。
笑红尘,很喜欢!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-06 16:30:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

台上卖力,台下卖命。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-08 17:21:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

“灯光下,生旦净末丑”
人生如一个大戏台啊 Cool 抱抱茉儿 Rolling Eyes
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PostPosted: 2008-03-08 18:25:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

怎样才能酿一壶清醇
与你把盏临风
醉天,天醉
笑红尘 .....意境悠远.
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PostPosted: 2008-03-08 19:22:11    Post subject: Re: “灯光下,生旦净末丑”人生如一个大戏台啊... Reply with quote

合心 wrote:
“灯光下,生旦净末丑”
人生如一个大戏台啊 Cool 抱抱茉儿 Rolling Eyes


哎哟微,你说我怎么这么二儿泥。。。。。
整明白了。哈,,,,见笑!谢谢合心!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-08 21:06:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wink 灯灭了,我在黑暗中醒着 ......
呵呵,甭一直醒着哈,有时得闭会儿呢,别让眼睑累着( Laughing 玩笑了)
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PostPosted: 2008-03-08 21:08:08    Post subject: Re: 台上卖力,台下卖命。 Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
台上卖力,台下卖命。

Wink 什么都不卖
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PostPosted: 2008-03-09 05:07:04    Post subject: Re: 怎样才能酿一壶清醇 与你把盏临风 醉天,... Reply with quote

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怎样才能酿一壶清醇
与你把盏临风
醉天,天醉
笑红尘 .....意境悠远.


哇!赵老大!您有两米高吧?
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PostPosted: 2008-03-09 05:08:42    Post subject: Re: 台上卖力,台下卖命。 Reply with quote

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诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
台上卖力,台下卖命。

Wink 什么都不卖


什么都有,什么都卖,什么都不奇怪!YAHOO~
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PostPosted: 2008-03-10 01:08:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢扣题的最后一节。
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