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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 20:38:06    Post subject: 四季歌 Reply with quote

四季歌

燕子衔来新绿的枝丫
雪水河蜿蜒出春的打闹

夏夜你微笑的嘴角
开着牵牛花兰色的情幻

体验镰刀锋刃的快感
望不断的是南归的秋雁

睡在沉实无忧的冬床
酝酿着另一轮新春希望
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 20:38:53    Post subject: hahh`` Reply with quote

陪着爱爱玩一下
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 20:43:02    Post subject: 四季歌~~ Reply with quote

还附一首以前微笑的四季,乱和一把~

野鸭融化了春江的残雪
新荷上跳跃着婴儿的呀呀学语

她的微笑长出一枝薄荷
整个夏天,我双耳清凉

秋水采集斑斓的鹅卵石
满眼都是落叶的欢天喜地

冬天的钟声收割了
秋田里最后一片荞麦
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 22:07:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

风格挺相象的。好象旧作更有诗味一些,有点偏爱。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-06 08:33:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

好看。也来和一首。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-06 10:27:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

要写两季歌~
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PostPosted: 2008-03-06 16:44:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

四季轮替,精彩交棒。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-10 01:45:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

恩,我也更喜欢旧作。
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