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《我梦见春天》等问好大家!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-02 05:12:40    Post subject: 《我梦见春天》等问好大家! Reply with quote

悬在巨大的虚空中

水龙头被弄好了
不紧不慢的水滴声一下子就消失了
所有的声音都被压在了
这静默的水龙头下
寂寞开始无限地摊开
梦里的荷叶枯萎了一地
那渐渐低下的水位
露出了群鱼的尸体
这些抬高了我们沉默的声线
整夜我们就悬在巨大的虚空中


我梦见春天

我在春天里梦见春天
这一点也不稀奇
我想说的是,我梦见的春天
一切都在沉睡
河水不涨,草不长,大地龟裂
天空中看不到一缕炊烟
我等待的姑娘没有出现
我能够触摸的是
我的胡子以光的速度生长
生长成茫茫的庄稼地
却没有一只鸟
愿意在里面筑巢
我梦见的就是春天
春天里我不喊一个词


放屁

这是平静的下午,在某医院的病危房
一群病危者平静地盯着电视屏幕
那时,电视主持人在喊
“朋友们,我们要对生活充满信心”
整个下午,他们就那么平静的听主持人喊
没有丝毫的激动
因为他们知道死神此刻就蹲在电视机旁
等着看他们的笑话

526061,广东肇庆学院,05文秘一班,陈亚伟
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PostPosted: 2008-03-02 06:58:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

思绪开阔, 文笔灵动
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PostPosted: 2008-03-02 18:29:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

前二个很喜欢,问好
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 00:52:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

春天里我不喊一个词

很好.
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 06:46:45    Post subject: Re: 思绪开阔, 文笔灵动 Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
思绪开阔, 文笔灵动


谢谢白水老师!在刊物看了您的照片!呵呵
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 06:48:47    Post subject: Re: 前二个很喜欢,问好 Reply with quote

歪歪1981 wrote:
前二个很喜欢,问好


谢谢,问好!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 06:50:26    Post subject: Re: 春天里我不喊一个词 很好. Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
春天里我不喊一个词

很好.


谢谢老师肯定!问候!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 07:02:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

我在春天里梦见春天
这一点也不稀奇
我想说的是,我梦见的春天
一切都在沉睡
河水不涨,草不长,大地龟裂
天空中看不到一缕炊烟
我等待的姑娘没有出现
我能够触摸的是
我的胡子以光的速度生长
生长成茫茫的庄稼地
却没有一只鸟
愿意在里面筑巢
我梦见的就是春天
春天里我不喊一个词

喜欢。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 07:07:24    Post subject: Re: 我在春天里梦见春天 ... Reply with quote

回到拉萨 wrote:
我在春天里梦见春天
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谢谢老师喜欢!觉得你很勤奋!很喜欢你的民工系列!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 07:09:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

最后一首以前再哪看过,还有印象~

前两首给人颓废梦幻般的感觉,总后一首强烈对比讽喻效果,欣赏了
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 07:15:17    Post subject: Re: 最后一首以前再哪看过,还有印象~ ... Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
最后一首以前再哪看过,还有印象~
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颓废,确实,呵呵。问候您!
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