冷巉 举人

Joined: 10 Mar 2007 Posts: 1106 Location: 中国十堰 冷巉Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-24 17:17:28 Post subject: 《你听,这是个独白》 |
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《你听,这是个独白》
文/冷巉
奇妙的,你能听到
没有空
一场享受
感染你的真实
灵魂,苍白的微笑
寂寞的舞台
未来。梦的色彩
尘埃闪耀
渺小不倦地独舞
曾经阳光中翻飞
叹 无奈
情长徘徊
0:41 2008-2-17 _________________ syr@shiyanren.com
冷巉 湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000 |
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阿依琼裙 秀才

Joined: 09 Apr 2007 Posts: 920 Location: 废墟之上 阿依琼裙Collection |
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笑后 秀才

Joined: 03 Feb 2008 Posts: 136 Location: From nanjing 笑后Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-25 19:44:48 Post subject: |
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欣赏和问好朋友! _________________ 廖蕙琳 以写悼亡诗而自成一家,一意孤行! |
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金金 进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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顾小花 童生

Joined: 23 Aug 2007 Posts: 80 Location: 中国南京 顾小花Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-27 21:08:20 Post subject: |
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有些白,问好! _________________ 春风吹又生:http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1285636777 |
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上城 进士出身

Joined: 15 Mar 2007 Posts: 2024 Location: 江夏黄鹤楼 上城Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-03 18:39:38 Post subject: |
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好诗。唯美的心动。问好。祝健康 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-03 18:53:13 Post subject: |
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这不是个独白!是心语的无奈。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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冷巉 举人

Joined: 10 Mar 2007 Posts: 1106 Location: 中国十堰 冷巉Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-03 18:53:27 Post subject: |
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谢谢所有朋友的回贴。冷巉正在学习中,还请多多给予指点~~~`` _________________ syr@shiyanren.com
冷巉 湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000 |
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冷巉 举人

Joined: 10 Mar 2007 Posts: 1106 Location: 中国十堰 冷巉Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-03 18:54:28 Post subject: Re: 冷巉 你的独白是吗?你会很好的!要信。... |
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金金 wrote: |
冷巉
你的独白是吗?
你会很好的!要信。 |
金金,谢谢! _________________ syr@shiyanren.com
冷巉 湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000 |
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