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《你听,这是个独白》
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 17:17:28    Post subject: 《你听,这是个独白》 Reply with quote

《你听,这是个独白》
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奇妙的,你能听到
没有空
一场享受
感染你的真实
灵魂,苍白的微笑

寂寞的舞台
未来。梦的色彩
尘埃闪耀
渺小不倦地独舞
曾经阳光中翻飞
叹 无奈
情长徘徊

0:41 2008-2-17

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阿依琼裙
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PostPosted: 2008-02-25 18:36:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

图文很好的搭配和表达
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PostPosted: 2008-02-25 19:44:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏和问好朋友!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-26 02:24:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

冷巉

你的独白是吗?
你会很好的!要信。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-27 21:08:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

有些白,问好!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 18:39:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗。唯美的心动。问好。祝健康
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 18:53:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

这不是个独白!是心语的无奈。
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冷巉
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 18:53:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢所有朋友的回贴。冷巉正在学习中,还请多多给予指点~~~``
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 18:54:28    Post subject: Re: 冷巉 你的独白是吗?你会很好的!要信。... Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
冷巉

你的独白是吗?
你会很好的!要信。


金金,谢谢!
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