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三月的琉光

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Posted: 2008-03-04 13:10:27 Post subject: 三月的琉光

我知道，春天一定会来细雨后的嫩绿鹅黄是我望尽了一冬的色彩花的心扉一朵一朵的打开晃动出的是昨日的梦临水而立，看春风浅渡花香轻轻漫过烟雨飘逝的光线穿越低垂的柳丝岸边窈窕的身影是谁的景致，若即若离怎样才能，在桃花睡去之前在某颗草尖上晶莹的露滴里和你相遇曾经流失的花语悄悄融解, 盛满琉光的玉盏 03/04/2008

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Posted: 2008-03-04 14:12:39 Post subject:

很喜欢第二段。悠子几天不见，请个安！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-04 15:46:29 Post subject:

欣赏。有时间也跟着画个葫芦。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-03-04 15:57:30 Post subject:

茉儿，有缘好。最近忙，请假~。有缘，等着看你的葫芦~

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Posted: 2008-03-04 16:50:23 Post subject:

我知道，春天一定会来可我心里的春天又在哪里呢？ _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-03-04 17:03:04 Post subject: Re: 我知道，春天一定会来可我心里的春天又在...

点点儿 wrote:

我知道，春天一定会来
可我心里的春天
又在哪里呢？

在我口袋里啦！拿去、拿去！
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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-04 17:05:28 Post subject: Re: 茉儿，有缘好。最近忙，请假~。有缘，等着...

悠子 wrote:

茉儿，有缘好。最近忙，请假~。
有缘，等着看你的葫芦~

没得请假！再忙，也要上来聊个是非。
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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-04 17:13:07 Post subject:

曾经流失的花语，正悄悄融解，盛满春光的玉盏。（ZT） _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-04 17:53:47 Post subject: Re: 我知道，春天一定会来可我心里的春天又在...

点点儿 wrote:

我知道，春天一定会来
可我心里的春天
又在哪里呢？

点儿好。嗯，心里的春天，在诗盗口袋里

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Posted: 2008-03-04 17:55:17 Post subject: Re: 茉儿，有缘好。最近忙，请假~。有缘，等着...

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

没得请假！再忙，也要上来聊个是非。

无是无非，聊什么呀
这么专制，以后就不用请假L

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Posted: 2008-03-04 17:55:54 Post subject: Re: 曾经流失的花语，正悄悄融解，盛满春光的玉...

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

曾经流失的花语，正悄悄融解，盛满春光的玉盏。（ZT）

这句漂亮，我收了~

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Posted: 2008-03-04 19:56:53 Post subject: 你要啊～好！给你，不过我把春光拿掉！

悠子 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

曾经流失的花语，正悄悄融解，盛满春光的玉盏。（ZT）

这句漂亮，我收了~

曾经流失的花语，正悄悄融解，盛满琉光的玉盏。
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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-04 20:43:17 Post subject:

3段都好。。我喜欢这首。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-03-04 20:44:17 Post subject:

望尽了的一冬的色彩因为这是冬的尽头的色彩 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-03-05 13:15:43 Post subject:

谢盗儿袖儿~

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Posted: 2008-03-05 18:15:20 Post subject:

不谢，这叫享受 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-03-05 19:05:33 Post subject:

哈，看把你美的

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Posted: 2008-03-05 19:09:03 Post subject:

悠子的春天来了~~~ 开满了各种美丽的,浪漫的诗葩~

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