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习作几首
和落
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 02:50:47    Post subject: 习作几首 Reply with quote
　 转应曲--刺客

列传，列传，千古关山梦断。
雪映梅华月残，宫门身孤剑寒。
寒剑，寒剑，归来缁衣血染。


　　 山渐青

风无痕，梦无痕，茹素不出几度春。
雨纷纷，花纷纷，凝睇凭楼妆未成，落红何处寻。


眼儿媚
----雪封江城寄友人

朔风吹雪晚来袭，月落洞庭西。
银霰封路，羁程困苦，莫瘦冰肌。
行云迢递拳拳语，别后不堪提。
霜湖锁雾，玉尘折柳，难断归期。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 09:51:47    Post subject: Reply with quote
赞刺客豪侠,叹羁程困苦,憾落红何处,欣赏.
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和落
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 17:07:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢黄洋界先生关注，问好。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 18:43:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
意境不错，欣赏！
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PostPosted: 2008-03-06 00:30:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
冷气逼人。欣赏了！
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和落
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PostPosted: 2008-03-06 02:24:24    Post subject: Re: 意境不错，欣赏！ Reply with quote
qinghongh wrote:
意境不错，欣赏！

谢谢鼓励。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-06 02:26:01    Post subject: Re: 冷气逼人。欣赏了！ Reply with quote
游向高原的鱼 wrote:
冷气逼人。欣赏了！

这个冬天确实很冷，不过很多人关心，所以心里很暖和。谢谢你的评论。
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