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我需要你的37度
陈忠
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Joined: 16 Jan 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-02-12 15:49:05    Post subject: 我需要你的37度 Reply with quote

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我需要你的37度,就像需要你
恰如其分的温柔
在远离河流的地方,你就是我的河流
让我沉湎,像鱼儿一样自由

在你母性的抚摸下,我的激情
将在你的快乐中增加些水草状的颤抖
除了晕眩,就是潮的涌动
充实着你海底的溶洞,就像红杉树

带着粗钝的齿形
我需要你紧贴着茎部,悄悄绽放
摇曳;我们不会腐烂
即使枯萎几十年后,依然含着矿质物

2

我要在你起伏的胸前释放快乐
在你的体内减轻孤独
并且高潮迭起。我要埋入
风暴和闪电,或者被揉碎的骨头

不要松开你拥抱的双手
不要在脆弱的心上留下冷漠的刻度
我不想做一块海面上的石头
在茫然四顾中,漂浮

我要在疯狂的夜晚,吮吸着
你光洁的肌肤;带着流血的伤口
我的呻吟将不绝于耳
直到窒息;灵与肉,达到极限


二〇〇七年二月十二日星期一23:22:34
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hepingdao
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PostPosted: 2007-02-12 17:53:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

情爱的表达,是一个很好的主题

从在远离河流的地方,你就是我的河流
引伸开来

在你的体内减轻孤独

感觉很好
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2007-02-12 18:21:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

大哥的另类诗也很好啊。
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沙漠
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PostPosted: 2007-02-12 22:14:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这样的描写,读着让人舒服!
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三色堇
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PostPosted: 2007-02-13 01:10:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

动情的大哥哦,地址已发你邮箱,收到吗?
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陈忠
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PostPosted: 2007-02-14 21:32:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

祝各位朋友春节快乐,陈忠提前给你拜年:
一年一年开心过,开开心心,一生快快乐乐,一世平平安安,一家和和睦睦,愿你生命中的每一个愿望全能得到实现!新春快乐!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-06 20:58:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

陈老师读了您的这首诗感动不已这不只爱情诗是一首熏陶得花儿都迅速开放得诗
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PostPosted: 2008-03-07 18:26:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

陈忠老师的诗歌的确不错. 好久不见回来了, 或许是太忙?
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