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小镇之恋
宣城田斌
秀才


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PostPosted: 2008-02-26 19:37:01    Post subject: 小镇之恋 Reply with quote

小镇之恋

田 斌

只要一与你见面
就让我想起小镇的初恋
夜色里 小河边 桥下流水
桥上两手相牵
天空星星眨着眼睛
撒满河波光晶莹
我们哼着小曲
风吹着 月光照着
无人的夜
没人看得见
悄悄地 说一些不着边际的话
梦一样温馨浪漫
只到夜凉打断我们的话语
沿着来时的小路
乘着夜色
踮着猫步 偷偷回家




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杯中冲浪
进士出身


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Location: 中国
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PostPosted: 2008-02-26 20:42:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

恋爱很美,但语言平淡。
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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
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Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2008-02-27 03:44:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

想起小镇的初恋。。。。。诗意平了。
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