是有缘
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 Posted: 2008-02-20 15:59:53 Post subject: [浣溪沙] 咏梅 (二首) |
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赏梅
昨日庭园满树空，寒梅晓雾影丛丛。蝶飞好梦又东风。
春月无情花令短，江山有意雨烟浓。怜香叹息几人同？
画梅
曲干疏枝瘦骨公，多棱指节叉斜空。谁人雾里练晨功？
仙气飘来云瓣白，朱颜退去脂心红。暗香浮动月明中。 |
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晓松
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| Posted: 2008-02-20 18:55:40 Post subject: |
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| “春月无情花令短，江山有意雨烟浓。”“仙气飘来云瓣白，朱颜退去脂心红”，两对儿不错。只是对“蝶飞”有一点儿小疑问，梅蝶不同时。当然梦蝶另说。未知当否？ |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-02-20 22:31:27 Post subject: |
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谢谢晓松斑竹点评。不好意思，确实是说的梦蝶春舞。
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蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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duzhi
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| Posted: 2008-02-20 22:43:22 Post subject: |
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春月无情花令短，江山有意雨烟浓。欣赏。
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-02-21 15:20:27 Post subject: |
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谢谢duzhi君雅赏。问好。
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