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回首，再回首

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Posted: 2008-02-18 19:44:03 Post subject: 回首，再回首

两粒砂的相遇是否，给整片沙滩一个存在的理由于是不愿再看潮来潮走远离那一片浩瀚的淼茫，远离漫游在偶尔迷失方向的时候是否，还要回走到那条来路似有似无的，却平坦得可以望去尽头收藏昨日的风雨和波澜和远方那些光线溅出的色彩四季的心事，是否已被岁月的风吹散回首，再回首回首与再回首之间，还能承载多少无奈，多少遗憾，多少追求请不要随意推开我拈花的手 02/18/2008

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两个人相遇的时候，人类便有了存在和繁衍的理由。回首，象喝了一杯多滋多味的老陈酒忽悲、忽喜、忽忧时光匆匆由早春去了晚秋流水匆匆自去了再也没有回头倦鸟入林的时候落日又照亮了一下熟悉的楼头月亮爬上树梢又悄悄地跟着太阳西走夜沉静，思未休人 - 梦游 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-02-18 22:02:11 Post subject:

两首不分轩轾。不过！女性加十分。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-02-19 08:17:01 Post subject:

有缘好，好诗。诗盗有些重男轻女。

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Posted: 2008-02-19 08:46:09 Post subject:

欣赏！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-02-19 09:35:32 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

有缘好，好诗。诗盗有些重男轻女。

加十分不够的意思？那好！以后女性加九十分。这个时代，当然要纵男亲女！
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Posted: 2008-02-19 11:26:12 Post subject:

别，偶要数砂子了 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-02-19 15:56:43 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

加十分不够的意思？那好！以后女性加九十分。这个时代，当然要纵男亲女！

加分，是重男轻女，也是纵男亲女

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Posted: 2008-02-19 15:57:52 Post subject:

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别，偶要数砂子了

好，你数。数完了给它们配对，然后写个报告。

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Posted: 2008-02-19 15:59:54 Post subject:

有偶数个沙子吗 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-02-19 16:01:42 Post subject:

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有偶数个沙子吗

多出来的那一个，把它扔进大海

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Posted: 2008-02-19 16:10:53 Post subject:

上面刻上字，我多余~ _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-02-19 16:23:47 Post subject:

这粒砂碰到了你，真可怜。无辜啊

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Posted: 2008-02-19 16:32:26 Post subject:

说不定数错了 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-02-19 18:32:49 Post subject:

仿制的，不管怎么总不如真品。这是实话，没有带歧视吧？ _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-02-20 07:11:42 Post subject:

其实我这首写得乱78糟。

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Posted: 2008-02-20 07:20:07 Post subject:

请不要随意推开我拈花的手好的, 拈花还要微笑~~

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