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抉择(诗三首)
刘亚全
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PostPosted: 2008-03-02 06:51:34    Post subject: 抉择(诗三首) Reply with quote

<<北风已过>>



一些翅膀结得霜化了
地上爬行的石头早厌倦冰凉
女人散开飘逸的黑发
微闭着会笑的眼睛
等你来吻

所有该绿的草都绿的时候
所有该开的花都开的时候
阳光与水纠缠不清
索性蹲在门槛上瞌睡
当梦里已经是女人的影子

北风已过
人们享有爱情
如果男人灭绝后
野兽出来占据平原
只好赞美世界是美丽的




<<诬陷至宝>>


凿开一双眼
你的思想掉了下去
深邃黑洞里
好象已找到至宝

这就是光明栖息的滩岸
没被你的到来而惊异地四蹿
你攥疼了堵塞的街道和书简
只想垫在脚下翻越几粒药片

有病的目光钩到些雪的遗嘱
读很多遍也未明白今天与明天的区别
转身看看后头凿落了满地石子
正磨破着向你伸手人的脚

喉咙有些冲动
使劲才挤出鸟的声响
一下子大地绿了
把你吓的六神无主

撇弃干瘪的躯壳儿
就想怎样去逃
声色捎带脚儿挂住屋檐上那棵草
搂着秋天的影子哭吧



<<抉择>>

撒开你手里的知觉
向天空爬动
擦过一只疲惫鸟嘴边
劫持下那条将要失去生命的虫子

多么可怕的想法
鸟的孩子会把你恨之入骨
你说如果它们吃了虫子
是一种罪恶

老天爷会惩罚罪恶
或者鸟儿们某天成为猎人的目标
下场会和虫子一样的
这是自然能量守恒

善良举起鞭子抽打邪念
欲望掐住公平的咽喉狂喊
双子座你
犹豫该转过哪张脸
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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-03-02 07:00:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

双子座你
犹豫该转过哪张脸

Very Happy Very Happy
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 01:10:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

思路较比开阔.

只是有点概念化.个见请谅.问好!
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 03:08:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

有病的目光钩到些雪的遗嘱
读很多遍也未明白今天与明天的区别
转身看看后头凿落了满地石子
正磨破着向你伸手人的脚
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刘亚全
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PostPosted: 2008-04-20 07:13:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢你们的意见建议!!问好
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