合心
秀才
Joined: 03 Feb 2008
Posts: 122
Location: 山西太原
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 Posted: 2008-02-21 05:22:46 Post subject: 《蓝》 |
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《蓝》
风在云中
漾起，水墨晕染
色彩。我在
你的眸中作画
变幻，移景
干笔擦染风痕
你能否告诉我
那潺潺而下的
是水，还是泪
丝丝缥缈
寂静。天空的心跳声
绽放了
那束水中的花
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半溪明月
榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760
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| Posted: 2008-02-21 07:21:21 Post subject: |
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| 意境很美,就是句子有点硬了~问好合心! |
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迪拜
同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588
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| Posted: 2008-02-21 18:47:11 Post subject: |
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抒情的作品
问好！ |
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nobody
进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
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| Posted: 2008-02-21 22:24:45 Post subject: |
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丝丝缥缈
寂静。天空的心跳声
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I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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