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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2007-11-29 23:52:53    Post subject: 请版主帮忙删除 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 00:45:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
飘飘入世
如水之不得不流
这是回旋于我耳边的
最后一种声音
....结尾不错，整体感觉可提炼,个见，问好.
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 00:45:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
飘飘入世
如水之不得不流
这是回旋于我耳边的
最后一种声音
....结尾不错，整体感觉可提炼,个见，问好.
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2008-04-27 02:06:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢你的点评　　问好
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-04-27 02:57:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
飘飘入世
如水之不得不流
这是回旋于我耳边的
最后一种声音


怎么感觉情绪这么灰暗呢～祝好心情！问好！
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