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我们的节日

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2008-02-06 22:20:22 Post subject: 我们的节日

我们的节日谁的祝福安静盛开消融的积雪裸露出朴素的大地使得我对春天的即将来到深信不疑一滴泪水的简约　幻想的凝固这个年代的得失你可以看得玲珑亦会心生无限悲哀时间切割的岁月成片成片挂在没有叶子的枝头回首　年底的大雪冰冻最后的事实空气中的味道在今天始终来路清晰炸裂的鞭炮告别这一年的最后一夜钟声响起　酝酿的情绪节奏一致一样的语言结构了一场盛大的宴会让我们伪装将要发泄的表情收回握在瘦小的手中参加盛宴和狂欢飞舞 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2008-02-06 22:42:43 Post subject:

好诗!!!内蕴一种力量!!! _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2008-02-08 01:22:58 Post subject:

时间切割的岁月成片成片挂在没有叶子的枝头回首　年底的大雪冰冻最后的事实 ——学习美句子！问好！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2008-02-09 06:05:47 Post subject:

用词刁钻，添别样感受。过年好。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2008-02-09 18:16:06 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

好诗!!!内蕴一种力量!!!

问好海军！

自知是颓废的精神，期待自己救赎！
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Posted: 2008-02-09 18:17:24 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

时间切割的岁月成片成片挂在没有叶子的枝头
...

问好山城子，谢！远握！
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Posted: 2008-02-09 18:19:25 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

用词刁钻，添别样感受。
过年好。

问好nobody！　过年好！

笑～～为人可是很温顺的哦～～
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Posted: 2008-02-09 19:16:38 Post subject:

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Posted: 2008-02-11 18:57:02 Post subject:

喜欢，也问好！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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