合心
秀才
Joined: 03 Feb 2008
Posts: 122
Location: 山西太原
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 Posted: 2008-02-04 19:00:43 Post subject: 无言．花火 |
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无言．花火
穿透。深色皱褶
泛起春的气息
线条 笔触
却无法描绘 一片沉静
苍黄 绿红
饰不住那寸骨意象 脉络起伏
隐约中，凹凸心颜
映一地蔷薇，莹莹。
弦涩。难锁涟漪
延伸处，瓣落飘零
心底，晚霁塞穹
低眉，任绵暖长凝
他春
指动音起 双魂萦。
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杯中冲浪
进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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博弈
榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
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| Posted: 2008-02-05 06:49:03 Post subject: |
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有词的类似形式，意境不错。
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赵福治
探花
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2008-02-06 16:21:13 Post subject: |
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| 典雅,意境悠远之作. |
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阿依琼裙
秀才
Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Posts: 920
Location: 废墟之上
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苏茉儿
秀才
Joined: 31 Dec 2007
Posts: 739
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| Posted: 2008-02-14 09:37:03 Post subject: |
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轻盈！好词。
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合心
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Joined: 03 Feb 2008
Posts: 122
Location: 山西太原
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| Posted: 2008-02-15 20:21:42 Post subject: |
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 谢谢大家．
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