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[心情日记]除夕

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Posted: 2008-02-06 09:05:50 Post subject: [心情日记]除夕

听不到，爆竹串成的音符看不见烟花色色彩彩点缀的夜幕日子却依旧迫不及待地要穿上新衣服没有准备好的我，还在踌躇彼岸的电话，惊醒寒露细数，从指缝中失落多少回团圆，无法弥补任昨日化成烟荡开，似雾默默祈祷，一份深红色祝福把希望悄悄揣入口袋，捂住我若无其事地押上，未来一注０２／０６／２００８那天

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Posted: 2008-02-06 09:58:02 Post subject:

真矛盾真矛盾。。好了啦，哪有那么复杂~~~ 昨日是化不开的又湿嗒嗒的忧伤~~ 我把它凉在屋檐下，托腮坐等它风干。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-02-06 10:34:05 Post subject:

呀，除夕，就是，想半天想不起来，真地。。。春且住！忘了哪个说的了。 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-02-06 10:36:27 Post subject:

我若无其事地押上，未来一注（最后一句） _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-02-06 10:39:35 Post subject:

啥么 wrote:

呀，除夕，就是，想半天想不起来，真地。。。
...

除夕，就是，差点儿提前过了的一天，我晕
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梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-02-06 10:43:15 Post subject:

除了这天都算除去今夕都不算 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-02-06 10:47:45 Post subject:

今早被妹妹的电话吵醒。想不过都不行。　袖儿，点儿，啥儿，除夕快乐。

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Posted: 2008-02-06 12:53:34 Post subject:

听得到的是窗外的雨，台北的除夕冷的出奇！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-02-06 14:26:29 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

听得到的是窗外的雨，台北的除夕冷的出奇！

这两句写得好啊。。。祝你过年暖和

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Posted: 2008-02-07 02:48:02 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

听得到的是窗外的雨，台北的除夕冷的出奇！

这两句写得好啊。。。祝你过年暖和

报告：截至目前，过的过程并不暖和。
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