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半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-17 22:26:30 Post subject: 【桃花】

【桃花】清晨的广场上,两只鸽子衔来桃花,它们经历季节花蕾沾满露珠晨光下，晶莹的两颗葡萄桃花啊，不是食物不可以轻易采撷幻想中的伊甸园，蛇戴着墨镜它眼瞎了？舌头打结

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Posted: 2008-01-17 22:29:55 Post subject:

看来病早好了，而且恢复的不错。更胜从前。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-01-17 22:56:29 Post subject:

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看来病早好了，而且恢复的不错。更胜从前。

病来如山倒,去病如抽丝,那能那么快好，还在慢慢疗伤~ Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-01-18 18:14:35 Post subject:

看来病的不轻

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Posted: 2008-01-19 01:49:05 Post subject:

恩，沾上桃花的病，轻不起来的！

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-19 07:13:49 Post subject:

交代一下，这是别人在群里出的题目～

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Posted: 2008-01-19 07:35:52 Post subject:

有了最后两句，格外意味深长了！问好明月！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2008-01-19 18:29:16 Post subject:

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有了最后两句，格外意味深长了！问好明月！

呵呵，也就后两句好些～问好山城子老师～

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Posted: 2008-01-22 00:01:02 Post subject:

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半溪明月 wrote:

交代一下，这是别人在群里出的题目～

看。。被人这么一忽悠便交代了。。。呵呵。。。。
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我只说三句话,加上上面的一句,我的话说完了

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Posted: 2008-01-22 06:23:48 Post subject:

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半溪明月 wrote:

交代一下，这是别人在群里出的题目～

看。。被人这么一忽悠便交代了。。。呵呵。。。。

呵呵，这是个容易引起误会的题目，还是交代清楚好些～问好佳忆 Smile

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Posted: 2008-01-22 08:06:40 Post subject:

幻想中的伊甸园，蛇戴着墨镜它眼瞎了？舌头打结 ----不错. _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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Posted: 2008-01-28 21:00:17 Post subject:

问好溪语～新年快乐！

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Posted: 2008-02-03 21:57:23 Post subject:

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恩，沾上桃花的病，轻不起来的！ Laughing

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嘻嘻，可疑是个桃花霰，亲嘴亲的

明月好

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