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PostPosted: 2008-02-01 17:00:28    Post subject: 累 Reply with quote



雷霆万钧之后
余威
稀稀落落
电光不再激烈
似乎
在喘息

第三回合刚过
锣声响起
角落的躺椅
吱吱呻吟
整瓶矿泉水
浇头烂额
假牙已经偏离

层叠的稿纸
染着液体的痕迹
整缸烟头
余烟缕缕
一脸肃穆
凝视着斑斑和疏稀
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PostPosted: 2008-02-01 18:01:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

够累 Wink
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PostPosted: 2008-02-02 02:01:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

春天都快来了,轻松点儿:)
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PostPosted: 2008-02-02 15:24:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
够累 Wink


问候先生~~
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PostPosted: 2008-02-02 15:25:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

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春天都快来了,轻松点儿:)


问好~~
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PostPosted: 2008-02-02 17:07:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

运用侧面烘托得写法,很有技巧。欣赏你的书法。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-02 19:58:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
运用侧面烘托得写法,很有技巧。欣赏你的书法。


问好朋友!! Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2008-02-02 23:58:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

品得出的累!
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品得出的累!


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