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如云，如雾

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Posted: 2008-01-17 08:34:40 Post subject: 如云，如雾

云，缤纷多姿给天空娇媚的小脸儿认真的补妆总能牵动我心默默的注视、沉默欣赏它行走中的独特韵致雾，风情万种揽山羞答答的依偎它怀里呢喃着梦幻般的心语轻轻拍打我柔软的心湖迷离我爱的船帆你，扑簌迷离似清风一阵唤醒我心湖酣睡的莲朵摇落满池的幽香漫过阳光，雨露，山峦，草滩弥漫在我的天空如云，如雾

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Posted: 2008-01-17 08:35:37 Post subject:

什么呀，因为怎么贴嘛，贴不上，，，，郁闷死了。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-01-17 08:36:41 Post subject:

我是说，音乐贴不上，我去研究研究，有谁可以告诉我怎么贴吗? _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-01-17 08:38:20 Post subject:

音乐好像贴不上。盗主连图都不让贴。茉儿犯禁耶

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Posted: 2008-01-17 08:39:37 Post subject:

噢，，，管不了那么多，没图没乐得，就等于我的诗没穿衣服。。。哈哈。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-01-17 08:42:19 Post subject:

对了，悠子，我去你那里悄悄去。。。还没恭喜你。俺去捣乱一番哈！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-01-17 09:27:42 Post subject:

恩，图不错！莲花漂亮，荷花？ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-01-17 10:57:35 Post subject:

嗯，，莲。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-01-17 11:39:00 Post subject:

哈，原来荷花开到这里来了。有云，有雾地，看得见吗？ _________________ 隔海抒情

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Posted: 2008-01-17 18:34:52 Post subject:

刘雨萍 wrote:

哈，原来荷花开到这里来了。有云，有雾地，看得见吗？

您好！您是没认真读，还是觉得不够好。。。。总得给点意见吧。

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Posted: 2008-01-17 19:50:00 Post subject:

苏茉儿 wrote:

刘雨萍 wrote:

哈，原来荷花开到这里来了。有云，有雾地，看得见吗？

您好！您是没认真读，还是觉得不够好。。。。总得给点意见吧。

这里节奏比较慢，要起大波动不容易。意见我想应该会有，问题是，你也没给他人太多意见。 want to smile

别说自己怎样怎样，观点就是观点，接受不接受是另外一回事。
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Posted: 2008-01-21 07:22:05 Post subject:

观点就是观点，接受不接受是另外一回事 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-01-21 23:02:37 Post subject:

图漂亮....记得曾画过一幅国画<莲>,那水滴却怎么也没这种晶透.... 真美~~ _________________ 我只说三句话,加上上面的一句,我的话说完了

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Posted: 2008-01-23 11:29:38 Post subject:

佳忆 wrote:

图漂亮....记得曾画过一幅国画<莲>,那水滴却怎么也没这种晶透....
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佳忆朋友，这图片时相机照的，不是画的，所以美的比较真实。要说画，的确是功夫才行，莲的画，要属莫耐大师的了。很棒！有时间也秀秀您画的吧，让我这无名小卒仰望仰望。嘿嘿！想必，落尘也蓬荜生辉。
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Posted: 2008-01-23 19:18:11 Post subject:

把真的水滴滴在画上不就得了？用画的多麻烦哪！蒸发、干了！再滴滴就是了。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-02-03 11:23:57 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

把真的水滴滴在画上不就得了？用画的多麻烦哪！
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哈哈,好主意诗~

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