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《冬天的桐花》(外一首)

姜维彬
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Posted: 2008-01-30 06:15:40 Post subject: 《冬天的桐花》(外一首)

《冬天的桐花》(外一首) 姜维彬灿烂的鸟儿是从山那边飞来的它们初到时就欣喜了阳光和雨露它们在蝴蝶香喷喷的裙裾下过世俗的生活这个冬天它们很热烈饱满像山坡上燃烧的红梅它们在同一棵树上集体出发了那些张着嘴巴的苹果正在夜以继日地成熟多么美的灯笼呵我终于看清了那条花船你站在船头眺望春天《诗意的春天》姜维彬是谁在一夜之间点亮了桃花的脸芬芳的灯笼相思弥漫一群诗意的蝴蝶让倒春的寒流消失在风中我答应过父亲暖暖地疏理越冬的种籽像鸟筛出的声音从指间传出怀春的梦便懒懒地洒落在大地春天来临除了泥土除了鲜亮的影子你还需要什么装饰从春天的嘴里开出的花和芽苞还像去年一样旧情难忘稿:四川泸县云锦石马兽医站姜维彬邮:646102 箱:jwb6979@126.com 该贴于2008-01-30 21:19:38被姜维彬编辑过 _________________ 姜维彬

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Posted: 2008-02-01 18:06:11 Post subject:

提起来

金金
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Posted: 2008-02-02 02:00:04 Post subject:

比较完整，顺意。就是简单了点儿。也不错。新年快乐 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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