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桃花源里掏花开

JMX2007
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Posted: 2007-11-30 17:23:49 Post subject: 桃花源里掏花开

桃花源里桃花开人间仙境共徘徊放下名利轻舟快驶进桃花源中来 _________________ ＪＭＸ２００７衷心感谢徐晓辉老师的帮助，我一定好好学习，不辜负您的盛情！

kokho
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Joined: 30 Nov 2006
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Posted: 2007-12-03 03:01:03 Post subject:

。这看来像古诗。。看看版面　［格律检验］你可以去那边玩玩　可以把这首　写成　古风、七绝　或者　七律呢　：）。。你这首，韵处理的清楚。。　内容如果能够　再有些意外　更好！起承转结　最后的结　如果可以加强　会跟好　。。我不是　古诗专家，你到古诗版　交交朋友　。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

柿子
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Joined: 25 Sep 2007
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Posted: 2008-02-18 11:13:26 Post subject:

和唐伯虎的桃花庵里桃花开差不多啊，古风味重啊 _________________ 心到、意到。

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