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题晓松题头照
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 08:23:42    Post subject: 题晓松题头照 Reply with quote
题晓松题头照

青霭朦胧看晓松
朝暾欲上愈葱茏
倾身尽览人间世
妙解千愁似暖风

注:去年三月有长诗<说"愁">获得好评.
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 11:05:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
倾身尽览人间世
妙解千愁似暖风

诚挚恳切的诗!
对晓松<说"愁">篇赞评恰如其份.
"倾身尽览""妙解千愁", 用词尤好
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 20:10:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢黄兄为题照赠诗，谢冰清老师关注，问二位好！
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PostPosted: 2008-01-18 06:20:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢冰清老师点评.
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PostPosted: 2008-01-18 12:04:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄老师, 倾身尽览人间世
"世"可否为"事", 因世与人间似有相同意思. 可能我理解不对 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2008-01-18 12:44:52    Post subject: Reply with quote
遵白水兄意见,以"事"换"世"好,避免意思重复.谢谢了!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-26 02:42:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
欣赏学习～～问好
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