莹雪
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 Posted: 2008-01-22 00:57:27 Post subject: 七绝—火凤凰 |
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烈焰燃身韧意坚，重生涅槃别经年。
吟鸣百鸟无声调，展羽旋飞舞碧天。 |
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2008-01-22 08:39:31 Post subject: |
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火鸟气度非凡,得以重生,诗以简洁出之.
"磐'字有误,般字下应该是木字.
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2008-01-22 16:37:13 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
火鸟气度非凡,得以重生,诗以简洁出之.
"磐'字有误,般字下应该是木字. |
应该是打字时的错误，我用的是微软拼音。有可能是把“涅槃”这一词误拼成“涅磐”了，我也没有细看。呵呵  |
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郑达夫
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2008-01-22 21:40:55 Post subject: |
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谢谢关注！ |
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