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鼠年将至（外一首）

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-01-19 00:39:15 Post subject: 鼠年将至（外一首）

《鼠年将至》摊开一场雪掩埋所有的色彩一些欲念开始冬眠车站，无数工蚁紧捂的口袋，无论丰瘪播散年的急切回巢。乡村的鼠年零度起始的季节需要爆竹噼啪加温另一种忙碌必须开始置办年货，更不能少春联或新衣雪白漫开的缤纷要大红作引《一切都在情理之中》一切都在情理之中一场雪的如期而降覆盖着的白踩踏出的黑 ..... 短暂的洁白亦如我们易逝的童年

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Posted: 2008-01-19 00:46:08 Post subject:

雪白漫开的缤纷要大红作引短暂的洁白亦如我们易逝的童年欣赏!感觉极好.学习! _________________ 我为自己唱挽歌---文学是个人的选择,不是集体的强加

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-01-19 01:47:06 Post subject:

谢谢，支持！问好！

山城子
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Posted: 2008-01-19 07:39:26 Post subject:

一切都在情理之中》一切都在情理之中一场雪的如期而降覆盖着的白踩踏出的黑 ..... 短暂的洁白亦如我们易逝的童年精美！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

嘉慕思
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Posted: 2008-01-19 16:25:16 Post subject:

谢谢你的关注,不过,我不悲观,我是个乐天派.你应该感觉到这一点. 文不必定如其人.写作是一种情绪现象.宁偏激勿中庸 _________________ 我为自己唱挽歌---文学是个人的选择,不是集体的强加

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-19 18:15:22 Post subject:

状态不错～

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-01-20 01:09:17 Post subject:

嘉慕思 wrote:

谢谢你的关注,不过,我不悲观,我是个乐天派.你应该感觉到这一点.
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若是这样就好！祝福啦~~~

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-01-20 01:12:25 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

一切都在情理之中》
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谢谢欣赏！

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-01-20 01:13:50 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

状态不错～

还别说，都很长时间没灵感了呢！好不容易闹了几天的雪，让我码了些文字 Embarassed

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-20 18:00:49 Post subject:

荷梦, 很欣赏这首. 不仅限于文字的美, 而在于它的内涵拓开了视野.

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-01-23 03:11:02 Post subject:

谢谢白水欣赏!

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