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有一种沉(外一首)

赵雅君
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Joined: 07 Aug 2007
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赵雅君Collection

Posted: 2008-01-16 02:55:32 Post subject: 有一种沉(外一首)

有一种沉(外一首) 　吉林/赵雅君一块着色的云把喘粗气的夕阳压在了身下让旷野里一棵孤独的树揣摩地狱。这感觉不如背个米袋子可以随时撂放，歇一歇或者，就着飞鸟的影子把米吃到胃里但我还是背上了一个秘密。若坚持和空气一样精神正常我就无法据实说春天也有假的，而且还当上了季节的头儿趁此时夜色正给嫉妒鲜花的雪花口授机宜 ⊙夹缝河的两岸。合欢树没抱紧的那一段。楼群形成的巷子。能伸进一指的脚和鞋。大地和天空。头脑里破碎的意识橱柜和墙壁共有隐私。我们若细心地找大概能找到思想着的灰尘若干枚钱币一只休息的蜘蛛大吃一惊是我们看见自己迅速消化食物生出欲望把痛苦和快感压缩工夫极好地穿过去不碰彼此，和有形无形

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2008-01-16 13:44:31 Post subject:

生动,自如, 哲理.

迪拜
同进士出身

Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

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Posted: 2008-01-16 18:56:04 Post subject:

都很号

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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Posted: 2008-01-16 22:01:01 Post subject:

橱柜和墙壁共有隐私。我们若细心地找大概能找到思想着的灰尘若干枚钱币一只休息的蜘蛛 ....有蕴涵的一组.

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