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夏荷

孙继廷
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Posted: 2008-01-16 01:23:39 Post subject: 夏荷

一池风雨一池情画船听雨打叶声唯汝独居泥淖里污浊不染君子风

晓松
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Posted: 2008-01-16 21:25:52 Post subject:

春柳、夏荷、秋枫、冬松，一年四季都写全了。赞！上面诗中，雨字重了，可否再斟酌？

孙继廷
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Posted: 2008-01-17 00:56:48 Post subject:

地方刊物投稿为珠溅船边打叶声.既符合韵律又避重字之嫌.但总觉没画船听雨诗味好

戴玨
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Posted: 2008-01-17 01:27:41 Post subject:

孙继廷 wrote:

地方刊物投稿为珠溅船边打叶声.既符合韵律又避重字之嫌.但总觉没画船听雨诗味好

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