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冬雪
老山
秀才


Joined: 05 May 2007
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老山Collection
PostPosted: 2008-01-13 23:16:55    Post subject: 冬雪 Reply with quote

冬雪

冬入潇湘六出迟,
无心算落玉花时。
昨宵一夜寒酥下,
朝起琼苞堆满枝



后记 此诗四句每句均有雪之别称或喻称,并取古用。
“六出” 南朝徐陵《咏雪》“三农喜盈尺,六出舞崇花。”
“玉花” 元 陈浮《江天暮雪》“长空卷玉花,汀州白浩浩。”
“寒酥” 明 徐渭《谑雪》“一行分向朱门屋,误落寒酥点羊肉。”
“琼苞” 宋 郭应祥《念奴娇 次贾子济韵》“琼苞玉屑,问天公、底事乱抛轻坠”
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黄洋界
探花


Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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PostPosted: 2008-01-14 01:22:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

老山兄信手拈来,古为我用,赞赏!
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冰清
同进士出身


Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-01-14 08:02:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

潇湘六出,蔚为壮观!
老山兄古诗词烂熟于心,赞.
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老山
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PostPosted: 2008-01-16 01:37:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢黄洋界冰清的鼓励.
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