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白水
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Posted: 2008-01-07 08:48:56 Post subject: 悬河

悬河堤坝增高, 水面也在增高越来越高的堤坝把城市没于水水面增高, 堤坝也在增高越来越高的水面把银河举到天上忧心忡忡的是李白的腕力九天银河一起落下来一只酒杯盛得下几多星星?

悠子
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Posted: 2008-01-07 08:54:17 Post subject:

担心的很有道理

hepingdao
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Posted: 2008-01-07 10:50:57 Post subject:

不用担心水到渠成 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-07 11:01:37 Post subject:

替"古人"担忧,错了,应该是"故人"~

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-07 12:51:24 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

担心的很有道理

谢谢理解. 问好悠子

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-07 12:53:20 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

不用担心
水到渠成
Very Happy

还行. 看来比李白强, 楞把银河托起来, 落不下来了. Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-07 12:56:25 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

替"古人"担忧,错了,应该是"故人"~ Very Happy

月亮, WHY?

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Posted: 2008-01-08 11:39:20 Post subject:

高处不胜寒，处高不容易。

山城子
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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:20:37 Post subject:

极富想象力！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

迪拜
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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:37:30 Post subject:

最后几句很不错

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:43:23 Post subject:

[quote="qinghongh"]高处不胜寒，处高不容易。[/quote] QINGHONGH, 谢谢理解.

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-08 15:08:58 Post subject:

[quote="山城子"]极富想象力！[/quote] 谢谢老师. 不是我极富想象力, 而是有些问题确实想了很久而不得其解. 难免担忧了. 谁都懂得高处不胜寒. 影星自杀, 歌星跳楼, 可人们仍前赴后继朝星路涌. 真能为星者到也罢了, 比如太阳. 让人担心的倒是那些被修渠,灌水的人抬起来的星. 我迷惑了, 如果那不该为星的人从半空坠落, 这些修渠,灌水有几个会舍身相救? 李白或许会? 可又能接几个? 更有可能到是李白也不过吟吟诗歌, 最多接接星光, 至于那陨石, 怕也是避之不及的吧?

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-08 15:09:43 Post subject:

[quote="迪拜"]最后几句很不错[/quote] 谢谢DD喜欢.

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Posted: 2008-01-08 17:28:17 Post subject:

忧完国忧完民，开始替古人担忧了放心吧，李白，他不是一个人在战斗！ _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-09 10:41:12 Post subject:

[quote="nobody"]忧完国忧完民，开始替古人担忧了放心吧，李白，他不是一个人在战斗！[/quote] 看来也是弟子三千

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Posted: 2008-01-09 12:19:57 Post subject:

忧心忡忡的是李白的腕力九天银河一起落下来一只酒杯盛得下几多星星? 欣赏流露古典的美学问好你学习了 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2008-01-09 12:22:25 Post subject:

一只酒杯只需盛自己足矣。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-09 16:33:54 Post subject:

[quote="莞君"]忧心忡忡的是李白的腕力九天银河一起落下来一只酒杯盛得下几多星星? 欣赏流露古典的美学问好你学习了[/quote] 谢谢. 问好莞君.

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-09 16:35:00 Post subject:

[quote="杯中冲浪"]一只酒杯只需盛自己足矣。[/quote] 哈, 冲浪. 或许你是对的

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Posted: 2008-01-10 04:09:39 Post subject:

不成！這是湊文字。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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