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七绝—箫韵

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-01-09 19:37:45 Post subject: 七绝—箫韵

箫韵空灵欲断魂，月寒若感自临门。兴来雅趣疏狂律，胜却胸中未道言。

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Posted: 2008-01-15 03:00:06 Post subject:

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游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2008-01-15 05:02:35 Post subject:

寒夜萧萧弄幽魂，空空旷野自无门。忽闻呜咽风雨处，仔细聆听谁语言？乱和，待修改。下面是莹雪的箫韵空灵欲断魂，月寒若感自临门。兴来雅趣疏狂律，胜却胸中未道言。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-01-15 16:33:48 Post subject:

梅影三叠 wrote:

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谢谢关注！

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-01-15 16:52:18 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

寒夜萧萧弄幽魂，空空旷野自无门。
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谢谢崇超兄和诗！
回和崇超兄
清韵声声诉雅魂，碧空曲曲至寒门。
已知冬尽春归日，休话哀愁泣咽言。

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Posted: 2008-01-16 01:47:13 Post subject:

版主好.半年多未上网.祝新年好

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-01-16 15:40:42 Post subject:

孙继廷 wrote:

版主好.半年多未上网.祝新年好

谢谢！欢迎重归论坛，祝新年好

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Posted: 2008-01-16 21:15:51 Post subject:

箫韵空灵欲断魂。“空灵”，用得好！有一事请教：“言”和“魂、门”是同韵吗？

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Posted: 2008-01-16 22:36:28 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

箫韵空灵欲断魂。“空灵”，用得好！
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谢谢晓松兄点评！
对，同韵。是［十三元］“元原源园猿辕坦烦繁蕃樊翻萱喧冤言轩藩魂浑温孙门”。

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Posted: 2008-01-17 11:55:27 Post subject:

酿造了一种空灵意境!

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Posted: 2008-01-17 17:18:57 Post subject:

很喜欢“箫韵空灵欲断魂”，有幽远箫韵的感觉。

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Posted: 2008-01-17 17:39:30 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

酿造了一种空灵意境!

谢谢冰清老师点评！

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Posted: 2008-01-17 17:40:27 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

很喜欢“箫韵空灵欲断魂”，有幽远箫韵的感觉。

谢谢qinghongGG点评！

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