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晚对菱花
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 12:01:54    Post subject: 晚对菱花 Reply with quote

你走时,留给我的眼睛
是一瓢清水,礼物不再重要
江边,惟有美人的泪
才能真正牵动江东父老的心

我知道,你的笑声
并不重要,重要的是
最后的颤音。犹如帝王带来的硝烟
总让诗人在半醒半梦中哭穷

晚风吹来时,你的诺言
在波光里安息。脚印路过窗前
我把一颗没有净土的心,或挥霍
或雕琢
中国,江苏,张敏
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 13:51:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

精致
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 15:41:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏了 问好
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 19:09:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-28 10:59:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

晚风吹来时,你的诺言
在波光里安息。脚印路过窗前
我把一颗没有净土的心,或挥霍
或雕琢
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-12-28 11:35:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

晚风吹来时,你的诺言
在波光里安息。脚印路过窗前
我把一颗没有净土的心,或挥霍
或雕琢 ........不错的一首,提读.
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PostPosted: 2007-12-28 11:53:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的诗歌
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 12:08:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢大家,远握.
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风走过,灯灭了,黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 11:26:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

怎么没有人再提呀,问好大家. Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 14:34:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,拎起耳朵继续提~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 11:49:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢明月,远握. Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 16:19:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

细腻的笔调 欣赏了 问好
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PostPosted: 2008-01-08 12:45:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢莞君,远握.
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PostPosted: 2008-01-11 05:10:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

你走時,留給我的眼睛
是一瓢清水,禮物不再重要

您期待用這樣的起句去引領讀者?

白小姐特意委託我向您問好,您好啊!))))35
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PostPosted: 2008-01-13 11:52:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白小姐,谢谢詩盜喜裸評,远握.
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