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《神秘园》
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PostPosted: 2008-04-05 19:41:17    Post subject: 《神秘园》 Reply with quote

《神秘园》

——清明寄语

又来到这里了,我想到雨
就淋湿了衣裳和眼角的泪痕
史诗搭建的城墙已残缺了臂膀
垛口处,是谁在那里乘凉

遥远的呼唤来自墓碑下的泥土
来自皱纹深处的溶化
无数的指针染上成长的痛
染上藤蔓的缠绵

寂静从园内的四周走来
压迫着刚刚绽放的色彩
我急需听到一种声音
它将来自我体内的暗流

春风吹裂了我的肌肤
吹裂了漂浮。我不得不躺下来
释放我的湿润与甘甜
那是园中唯一的喷泉

阳光的眼神泄露了一行脚印
那趾尖指向血管和脉搏架起的森林
我在一个念头里茂盛起来
轻轻地荡起了秋千

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PostPosted: 2008-04-05 20:11:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

幽幽的缠绵
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PostPosted: 2008-04-06 00:19:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

有点十四行的感觉.二十行更好.


我在一个念头里茂盛起来
轻轻地荡起了秋千
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PostPosted: 2008-04-06 00:43:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的诗,越写越好了.
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