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白水
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Posted: 2007-12-07 22:37:27 Post subject: 廊桥遗梦

廊桥遗梦魂断蓝桥如果真的断魂那一定不是奈何桥闭官只留疼痛的脉搏去接通你的心动霓虹灯从王府井大街直插沿江大道入多伦多榆树胡同你说小心, 天上有刀抬头, 却看见半边美丽的新月和几颗忽明忽暗的星星或是街灯? 醒来的时候才知道天堂的门并没有打开而地狱早已鬼满为患

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Posted: 2007-12-07 22:49:51 Post subject:

很有张力。欣赏。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

nobody
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Posted: 2007-12-07 22:50:43 Post subject:

很有张力。欣赏。闭官只留疼痛的脉搏去接通你的心动霓虹灯从王府井大街直插沿江大道入多伦多榆树胡同 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-12-07 23:10:49 Post subject:

欣赏！天堂的门并没有打开而地狱早已鬼满为患 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-12-08 07:43:37 Post subject:

醒来的时候才知道天堂的门并没有打开而地狱早已鬼满为患 ——冷飕飕的感觉。白水一向乐观，怎么也有了这种灰冷的感叹？ _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-12-08 08:08:42 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

很有张力。欣赏。

闭官
只留疼痛的脉搏去接通你的心动
霓虹灯从王府井大街
直插

沿江大道
入多伦多榆树胡同

谢谢没人

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-08 08:09:23 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

欣赏！

天堂的门并没有打开而地狱
早已鬼满为患

我也喜欢这句. 谢谢

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-08 08:14:50 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

醒来的时候
才知道
天堂的门并没有打开而地狱
早已鬼满为患
——冷飕飕的感觉。白水一向乐观，怎么也有了这种灰冷的感叹？

冲浪, 换一个角度看问题. 上天无门,入地挤不进去, 惟有留在人间了. 好死不如赖活着. 多好 Razz

子花
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Posted: 2007-12-08 08:22:50 Post subject:

把‘遗’味道出！欣赏白水诗人作品！

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Posted: 2007-12-08 20:34:14 Post subject:

天堂的门并没有打开而地狱早已鬼满为患这几句好 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-12-08 21:50:17 Post subject:

摆渡。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-12-08 23:05:51 Post subject:

有惊人的思绪，惊人句！

一地雪
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Posted: 2007-12-08 23:33:54 Post subject:

恩,很有感觉 _________________ 十个数字一笔债我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/yidixue

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Posted: 2007-12-08 23:46:44 Post subject:

好话大家都说完了，我就不说了吧这几天事情多了～没怎么上来

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Posted: 2007-12-09 01:48:04 Post subject:

欣赏 _________________ 用文字结缘拿鸿雁对话

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-10 20:39:11 Post subject:

子花 wrote:

把‘遗’味道出！欣赏白水诗人作品！

谢谢子花. 也很喜欢你的诗歌

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Posted: 2007-12-10 20:40:33 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

天堂的门并没有打开而地狱
早已鬼满为患

这几句好

看来和我一样想法, 好死不如赖活着 Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-10 20:41:21 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

摆渡。

谢谢理解

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Posted: 2007-12-10 20:42:32 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

有惊人的思绪，惊人句！

问好荷梦, 想你了.

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Posted: 2007-12-10 20:44:03 Post subject:

一地雪 wrote:

恩,很有感觉

问好一地雪, 希望多读到你的诗歌 Very Happy

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