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(也来捧个人场,吉檀迦利一把)颂歌之十
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PostPosted: 2008-01-04 17:39:52    Post subject: (也来捧个人场,吉檀迦利一把)颂歌之十 Reply with quote

颂歌之十
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象森林拥有一株小草那样,请你拥有我!
怜惜和轻蔑纵横分割着你的脸庞,从那小学生的习字本一般的方格里,请你俯视我,低下头来!
轻蔑我吧,给我你的轻蔑,你的凉露,只把怜惜留在你心上。
给我大块的发面团对于酵母的怜惜,短暂的亲昵之后,我将被从你身上拽走。
给我拇指对于指甲的怜惜,不久,我就要成为剪刀的点心,永远脱离你的触摩。
给我巨人般的悲伤对于眼泪的怜惜,天晴雨霁,悲伤还是依然那样广阔,那样蔚蓝,但那些雨呢?泪呢?我呢?
在秋天的诔文里,怀着难以割舍的依恋,请让我做最后一个字母。
请用你的一片柏叶,象音符一样压在我无知觉的身上,给我最初的,最后的安慰。
象森林拥有一株小草那样,请你拥有我!
在你的宁静中有我小小的宁静。
在你的黄昏里有我小小的黄昏。
在你的哭泣里有我小小的哭泣。
赞美的声音舔弄着我的舌头,毕生的眷慕象件脱线的织物,请你抓住我根的线头,我就要扣扣地迅速解开,向你展现它最初的形状。
象森林拥有一株小草那样,请你拥有我!
请你超越完全地拥有我,从我来之前,到我去之后!

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PostPosted: 2008-01-04 17:40:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

声明一下。学生时代的东西,也未修改。
当时还从没看过圣经,没见过教堂,没听过讲道,甚至一个基督徒都没见过 Laughing 基本上年幼无知 Embarassed
现在很多想法都改变了。贴出来,没道理可言,算是思考过的痕迹吧。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-13 20:13:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

天晴雨霁,悲伤还是依然那样广阔,那样蔚蓝....读,提炼些,效果更好.
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PostPosted: 2008-01-14 18:03:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

观点同上 Laughing 问好!祝福朋友们腊八愉快!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-15 00:30:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢两位,不好意思,自己读着都脸红了。想除尸灭迹,又找不到x Laughing
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