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城市系列之十四:城市找不到音准
时东兵
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 15:18:38    Post subject: 城市系列之十四:城市找不到音准 Reply with quote

城市系列之十四:

城市找不到音准

城市在相片上
显得老态龙钟
确是流水潺潺鸟语花香
而眼前的城市日长夜大
总也没有断乳期

公园的鸟笼
囚禁高飞的欲望
挤进围城里的渴望
总也找不到方向
郊外的野花顺手采摘
瓶中的花却慢慢凋零
大提琴的优雅
难抵手机彩铃的喧嚣
城市在痛苦中
找不到音准

头脑是头脑的摆设
眼睛是眼睛的路障
心是心的防盗门
手是手的对手
脚是脚的绊脚石
爱情是爱情的坟墓
金钱是金钱的墓志铭

白日里的梦
在夜晚楚楚动人

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莞君
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 15:22:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个很好 看过几变了 很有回味
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PostPosted: 2008-01-04 18:59:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错

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