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◎江南。刺绣
千里
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PostPosted: 2007-12-31 01:05:57    Post subject: ◎江南。刺绣 Reply with quote

◎江南。刺绣

一千首诗行,也比不上
一个女子弯腰捡拾满地的
碎片,一片片串起
挂在檐下,由风。等待

叮叮当当,敲碎月光
铺满一窗秋风轻拍的,叶影
忽明忽暗,绣出
细细的泪花

而,雨,雨总是
在钢针折返前
近距离地逼视带泪的
黑眼睛

沿着旅行的季节,反复
刻划风中的轨迹 
停留的逗号,都是悲伤的
音符 唱在同样的

伤心处
回忆 在动情的小站
洒满眼泪,模糊了
手写的,天书

跋序之间,关着你我
命运的
章回。始终企图搭着月光的
翅膀,偷偷 飞

刻意或不经心掉落的
羽毛,轻轻写下
临别的一行 ——— 脆弱
原本如此
2007.10.15 14:30 上海
2007.10.16 10:00


◎杭州
    —— 西湖。长堤

入冬以后
伴随寒风刺骨而来的
凌辱。我总默默希望你是知道的
我甚至默默祈祷
你是唯一
读透我的心的人

那么,那些
在你眼底刻写下的诗篇
便是这低温季节里
我身穿的棉袄
也是我渡过这一季艰难 的
唯一依靠
2008.01.01 14:07 上海


◎同游


仍旧是无声的
许愿 立春携来赊欠你我的
一刻——

  你往我的方向
  我往你的方向
  在同一条路上
  彼此,隔着的是一排一排
  充满生命韧性的
  迎春花

你匆匆写下诗行的草稿
我慌慌按下一张照片的快门
同年,同月,同日
同一瓣春天
同一朵,花

夹竹桃躲在被我们拨开的路两旁
抿着嘴,甜甜傻傻的
偷偷的 笑
整片天空就为我们
停在那里了

2008.01.02 21:30 上海
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-12-31 01:48:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

1000首詩行,也比不上
一個女子彎腰撿拾滿地的
碎片,一片片串起
掛在簷下,由風。等待
------优美的诗句~新年快乐!
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2007-12-31 05:08:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

crying to death
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博弈
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Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
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PostPosted: 2007-12-31 08:22:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

不錯, 起頭讓我一下想到鄭愁予.
抒情有致. 音韻不要也很好
_________________
(在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美)
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千里
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Joined: 30 Jul 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-01-02 02:46:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
不錯, 起頭讓我一下想到鄭愁予.
抒情有致. 音韻不要也很好



博弈,你好

非常感謝你的閱讀
另外,我還想增添
◎杭州
這一小首

愁予先生的句子,最惻動我心的:(背記得或許不很齊全)
我只是一隻布穀
春天遲遲不來
我也沒有話說



另外,謝謝明月,白水
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迪拜
同进士出身


Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

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PostPosted: 2008-01-02 16:47:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好

不错
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