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入室抢劫

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Posted: 2007-12-30 20:46:29 Post subject: 入室抢劫

入室抢劫一个蒙面的匪徒深夜来袭他抽一本书，点燃再抽一本，续燃直到书架再无一粒可值一阅的文字他慈爱的目视我一秒钟随之翩然而去我看一眼他身后的星空历史黑咕隆咚的黑 2007-12-28 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2007-12-31 00:04:04 Post subject:

慈爱。想來是特意用的，前面沒有鋪墊甚是可惜，會讓這詞覺著突兀。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2007-12-31 01:59:29 Post subject:

虚无主义？——请教！新年快乐！——朋友！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2007-12-31 02:16:56 Post subject:

书架再无一粒可值一阅的文字元旦快乐~

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Posted: 2007-12-31 04:47:49 Post subject:

不错问好新年

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-12-31 13:54:18 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

慈爱。想來是特意用的，前面沒有鋪墊甚是可惜，會讓這詞覺著突兀。

问好裸评，欢迎你多多贴贴，多多点评。
我想表述的是一种历史，中国太多的焚书坑儒了，文化在历史上曾多少次被损毁，而那些当权者在焚毁文化的同时又多么的含情脉脉，堂而皇之。作为文化的创造者又是多么的无奈。
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杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-12-31 13:55:38 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

虚无主义？——请教！
新年快乐！——朋友！

山城子老师新年快乐。我谈的是一种历史，中国太多的焚书坑儒了，文化在历史上曾多少次被损毁，而那些当权者在焚毁文化的同时又多么的含情脉脉，堂而皇之。作为文化的创造者又是多么的无奈。
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Posted: 2007-12-31 16:20:09 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

慈爱。想來是特意用的，前面沒有鋪墊甚是可惜，會讓這詞覺著突兀。

问好裸评，欢迎你多多贴贴，多多点评。
我想表述的是一种历史，中国太多的焚书坑儒了，文化在历史上曾多少次被损毁，而那些当权者在焚毁文化的同时又多么的含情脉脉，堂而皇之。作为文化的创造者又是多么的无奈。

俺談的不是發想，不過這動念也神奇。讚一個！

俺指的是技巧，或可說這首作品的布局。匪徒與慈愛，這是很極端的兩個形象，所以我說這應當是刻意安排。
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Posted: 2007-12-31 16:26:33 Post subject:

冲浪的诗总能找到一个很好切入点新年快乐! _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-12-31 19:41:25 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

慈爱。想來是特意用的，前面沒有鋪墊甚是可惜，會讓這詞覺著突兀。

俺談的不是發想，不過這動念也神奇。讚一個！

俺指的是技巧，或可說這首作品的布局。匪徒與慈愛，這是很極端的兩個形象，所以我說這應當是刻意安排。

慈爱，应当是反讽，匪徒那种猫捉老鼠的玩弄的心态和神态。
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Posted: 2007-12-31 19:42:36 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

冲浪的诗总能找到一个很好切入点

新年快乐!

问好领导，辛苦了。

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