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[原创]在纸上,我把一颗蓖麻怀想
李运邦
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 17:31:13    Post subject: [原创]在纸上,我把一颗蓖麻怀想 Reply with quote

<<在纸上,我把一棵蓖麻怀想>>
作者:李运邦

夏季。狭长的一尾
白条鱼 偷偷窥视
杂草繁盛的河岸
啃食青草 一头黑奶牛
农娃逮蚂蚱 在花生地里
这时 没人看见:
一棵蓖麻 在倔强地生长
毒辣辣的日头 渗进
绿中显黄的大手掌
芒枝刺目 无力偿还


坚守。蓖麻家族
最后一棵 历经
优胜劣汰的洪荒
遥想:放牧的童年
满河岸的蓖麻林
为蚂蚁、虫子搭凉
一晃的功夫 桑田沧海
何等变故 几近绝迹
消散了颜色 隐没了野香


故地。我再一次
寻访童年的蓖麻
还算欣喜地 见到
这仅有的一棵
在暴风雨中 来回摇荡
怎么了我 竟会泪夺眼眶
惭愧致极 没有白石老人的
生花妙笔 怎么能够
画出蓖麻的不朽时光?
哎,只好在这薄纸上
像怀念一场久远的
爱情 默默地
我把她 无尽怀想:
——好妹子要坚强,挺住别哭!

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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 17:53:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

可以再精炼一些
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 19:03:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

勾起我的记忆。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 19:08:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

生活是诗歌最好的营养。继续努力!问好!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-28 11:33:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的诗歌
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 15:46:36    Post subject: 感谢与祝福! Reply with quote

谢谢,几位斑竹老师的鼓励和支持!祝咱们的北美枫越办越好,全体老师们元旦愉快,工作顺利!!!
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