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进到夜里繁华无边
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秀才


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PostPosted: 2008-01-26 09:41:26    Post subject: 进到夜里繁华无边 Reply with quote

*进到夜里

关紧窗,拉拢厚厚的窗帘
我们进到夜的房间
床是床,柜是柜
冰箱里的水不能止渴

我们到底想偷走什么
带来的苹果此刻回到了树枝
那些口袋里的星星
也不再是痴迷的眼睛

只有手牵着,影子发出呻吟

*这只鸟

留下这只鸟的翅膀
就不要飞翔
留下这只鸟的歌唱
就忘掉伤痕

海之上梦之巅
这只鸟漫游了月亮回来
天空苏醒

转过身去,在后脑
留下这只鸟汹涌奔流的眼睛

*十月

脚跟无恨,脚趾有忧
在十月里潜逃
注定与十月一起跳崖

黄叶淹没什么
刚刚一个异乡人成异乡鬼
震撼之后,又有什么言语

知道自己的虚空
就不再害怕岁月的消瘦
寒风睡在皱纹里不哭不笑

*繁华无边

喧嚣世界,石头开花
没有野草没有野鸟

我幸福啊
身边的树早已熟视无睹

乘地铁抵达你的身体
感觉不出什么黑暗与空洞
你的五脏六腑霓虹闪烁

芳香世界,烟酒疯狂
没有泪水可以随便去哀叹

*老样子

你用月亮装饰天花板
月光沐浴的爱,依旧吵闹

牛与羊总有距离
跟旺旺的青草无关
你的泪水涌出沙地
风一声不语

无法改变世界
你也不会骑马
突然辞别一路烟尘

*阴天的向日葵

不在乎向谁投降
害怕的是失去方向

不冷不背叛
地盘不会随意摇荡

太阳出差了
病态的天空低低的
残疾的凡高是谁?

没有影子的世界
大地一片沉寂
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2008-01-26 16:19:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言不错,不过诗意朦胧。
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赵福治
探花


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PostPosted: 2008-01-27 15:51:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

一些句子有回味.
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