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花前饮.照影花前坐

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2008-01-03 02:11:38 Post subject: 花前饮.照影花前坐

花前饮.照影花前坐一帘烟色渐寒锁。暗香沁、今谁知我？我欲求月儿，照影去、花前坐。底事堪怜未成和。薄衾冷、山河同卧。静待归梦时，对奕者、有几个？ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2008-01-03 16:10:55 Post subject:

MM好词, 提

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Posted: 2008-01-03 16:27:00 Post subject:

“对奕者、有几个？” ——真正对手没几个。（开玩笑） MM 好词~

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-01-03 22:37:23 Post subject:

觉得你的“用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~”评这词，真的很恰当。这一份孤清的情怀，这一位脱俗的暗香，欲然而出！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-01-04 01:35:57 Post subject:

暗香盈袖诗情远明月入怀友谊长问好暗香! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2008-01-04 01:53:10 Post subject:

孤独的幽灵，是吧？ _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2008-01-04 02:02:40 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM好词, 提

感谢鼓励。
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暗香如沁
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Posted: 2008-01-04 02:03:06 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

“对奕者、有几个？”
——真正对手没几个。（开玩笑）
MM 好词~

为心不为棋．老师见笑了．
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Posted: 2008-01-04 02:03:59 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

觉得你的“用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~”评这词，真的很恰当。
这一份孤清的情怀，这一位脱俗的暗香，欲然而出！

问好妹妹．看过你的作品。多多指教。
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Posted: 2008-01-04 02:04:28 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

暗香盈袖诗情远
明月入怀友谊长
问好暗香!

问好老师。
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暗香如沁
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Posted: 2008-01-04 02:05:12 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

孤独的幽灵，是吧？

呵．和鬼一样了。汗．
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qinghongh
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Posted: 2008-01-04 10:09:13 Post subject:

“薄衾冷、山河同卧。” MM多情兼豪情，常不同凡响。

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