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模糊的印记

zhangmin
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Posted: 2007-12-20 18:03:31 Post subject: 模糊的印记

屋檐下,一粒种子半裸在我的眼前.儿子的指尖被文字磨细,再也捏不起让我心疼的沙粒时间,把所有的记忆重新安家.谁用心爱的烟雨裹紧我的西楼远去的钟声掏空了诗人的财富我把月光揉碎,堵住没有呓语的气息.在楼林里让梦与梦争个高低中国.江苏.张敏

子花
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Posted: 2007-12-20 18:43:12 Post subject:

欣赏！！好诗歌提上

zhangmin
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Posted: 2007-12-23 18:17:53 Post subject:

谢谢子花,远握. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

手套
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Joined: 23 Dec 2007
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Posted: 2007-12-23 19:28:35 Post subject:

飘的厉害。 _________________ 诗人非乞丐。

zhangmin
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Posted: 2007-12-24 11:52:29 Post subject:

谢谢手套,问好,远握. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

莞君
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Posted: 2007-12-26 10:20:14 Post subject:

写的微妙真好的一个 _________________ 莞君

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2007-12-26 13:43:40 Post subject:

新一年要来了, 盼与其他诗友多一点交流.

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-12-26 19:50:22 Post subject:

远去的钟声掏空了诗人的财富我把月光揉碎,堵住没有呓语的气息.在楼林里让梦与梦争个高低 ............直指内心的一首,问好,多来交流.

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-12-27 11:37:08 Post subject:

不错的诗歌快到新年了

zhangmin
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Posted: 2007-12-27 12:00:32 Post subject:

谢谢大家对我的关心,远握. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

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