zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2007-12-20 18:03:31 Post subject: 模糊的印记 |
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屋檐下,一粒种子
半裸在我的眼前.儿子的指尖
被文字磨细,再也捏不起
让我心疼的沙粒
时间,把所有的记忆
重新安家.谁用心爱的烟雨
裹紧我的西楼
远去的钟声
掏空了诗人的财富
我把月光揉碎,堵住
没有呓语的气息.在楼林里
让梦与梦争个高低
中国.江苏.张敏 |
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子花 秀才
Joined: 08 Mar 2007 Posts: 722
子花Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-20 18:43:12 Post subject: |
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欣赏!!好诗歌提上 |
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zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2007-12-23 18:17:53 Post subject: |
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谢谢子花,远握. _________________ 风走过,灯灭了,黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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手套 童生
Joined: 23 Dec 2007 Posts: 8
手套Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-23 19:28:35 Post subject: |
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飘的厉害。 _________________ 诗人非乞丐。 |
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zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2007-12-24 11:52:29 Post subject: |
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谢谢手套,问好,远握. _________________ 风走过,灯灭了,黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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莞君 秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Posts: 561 Location: 中国 陕西 莞君Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-26 10:20:14 Post subject: |
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写的 微妙 真好的一个 _________________ 莞君 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-26 13:43:40 Post subject: |
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新一年要来了, 盼与其他诗友多一点交流. |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-26 19:50:22 Post subject: |
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远去的钟声
掏空了诗人的财富
我把月光揉碎,堵住
没有呓语的气息.在楼林里
让梦与梦争个高低 ............直指内心的一首,问好,多来交流. |
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迪拜 同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006 Posts: 1588
迪拜Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-27 11:37:08 Post subject: |
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不错的诗歌
快到新年了 |
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zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2007-12-27 12:00:32 Post subject: |
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谢谢大家对我的关心,远握. _________________ 风走过,灯灭了,黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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