暗香如沁
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 Posted: 2007-12-18 19:37:32 Post subject: 七绝．咏雪二首 |
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非关情事下瑶台，猎猎风中舞步开。
白衣素心真我色，岂容天地染尘埃？
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可恼梅魂入梦来，幽香一缕拨云开。
为君洒下多情籽，守得春分画阁栽。
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2007-12-18 20:39:42 Post subject: |
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白衣素心真我色
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晓松
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| Posted: 2007-12-18 21:22:15 Post subject: |
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| 更喜欢第一首~ |
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2007-12-18 22:00:30 Post subject: |
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好美的雪。好诗！问好暗香姐  |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2007-12-19 17:58:51 Post subject: Re: 七绝．咏雪二首 |
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非关情事下瑶台，猎猎风中舞步开。
白衣素心真我色，岂容天地染尘埃？
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可恼梅魂入梦来，幽香一缕拨云开。
为君洒下多情籽，守得春分画阁栽。 |
七绝 咏雪---和暗香
（七绝平起首句押韵）
飘飘玉雪九天来，善舞多姿素心开。
大地春回冰化尽，香魂一缕返瑶台。
又及
（七绝仄起首句押韵）
琼玉飘飘天外来，多姿善舞素心开。
春回大地冰消尽，一缕香魂返故台。 |
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