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“原创投稿”：桃花笺

许星
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Posted: 2007-12-07 06:02:35 Post subject: “原创投稿”：桃花笺

“原创投稿” 桃花笺许星（四川绵阳）笛声随桃花盛开悠扬的曲调趟过岁月之河走进三月面对着水手无法平静下来桃花的姿势在女人的头上反反复复女人的心事在娇羞的枕边一点点滴落…… 在三月的河畔鸭的亲昵很随和安祥的牛犊不解地与妈妈一起痴痴地望着两只蝴蝶在飞远处就是桃树林泛绿的禾苗诗歌一般与桃花疯长三月属于桃花而桃花的秘密也只有女人才知道女人的秘密在三月的某个正午被性急的唢呐推进了桃花铺就的洞房…… 作者通联：四川绵阳市建设街8号《绵阳日报》社邮编：621000 电话：13208289329 邮箱：editress2001@163.com

许星
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Posted: 2007-12-07 06:05:55 Post subject:

请各位老师指导！谢谢！

古井
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Posted: 2007-12-07 06:28:33 Post subject:

内部的转接上稍欠哦、、、、、、

kokho
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Posted: 2007-12-07 18:51:44 Post subject:

。很有象征手法　：）　喜欢你的无我诗歌　。。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

许星
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Posted: 2007-12-20 05:15:02 Post subject:

谢谢！

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-12-20 16:58:12 Post subject:

写的不错

许星
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Posted: 2007-12-20 22:10:52 Post subject: 谢谢！

谢谢！

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-12-21 16:37:16 Post subject:

我觉得许星的诗非常好！！！！提读！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

许星
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Posted: 2007-12-23 02:01:54 Post subject:

谢谢海军！

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