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假如有一个女子
贝多芬
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PostPosted: 2007-12-21 01:32:08    Post subject: 假如有一个女子 Reply with quote

假如有一个女子

1.
假如有一个女子
她喜欢微笑着看你

喜欢把自己的小手
放在你的大手里摇摆

有你在时
她的眼睛里
闪动着幸福的光泽

当你离去
她会默默的想你
但不会叫出你的名字

2.
假如有一个女子
她喜欢靠在你的胸前
倾听你的心跳

当你抱她
她会深深的呼吸
记住你的味道

当你吻她
她会闭上眼睛
仿佛阳光照耀在脸上

如果这个时候
你说"我爱你"
她会说"我也爱你"

3.
她不需要玫瑰
她会为你的一首小诗感动

假如有一个女子
这样的女子

我要让她
永远做我的妻子
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渴望苏醒的日子不会到来

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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-12-21 07:21:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

还好, 要求不算太高. Very Happy

很纯美的小诗
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-12-21 16:33:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

她不需要玫瑰
她会为你的一首小诗感动

清纯!!!
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——拙作《离开村庄》
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贝多芬
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PostPosted: 2007-12-21 18:09:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

要求不高,找一个还是很难的 Very Happy
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莞君
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Joined: 20 Oct 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 10:35:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏了 不错 提
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