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《裸 露》(二首)
宣城田斌
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PostPosted: 2007-12-16 20:51:34    Post subject: 《裸 露》(二首) Reply with quote

《裸 露》(二首)



田斌



是谁让我无掩的心迹裸露

倾诉 表白都在自然中流露

像天空为了晴朗 澄明

大胆地撕开了遮掩的阴云

那流泪后的温馨

绚烂了生活的彩虹与梦



爱啊 你对我弥足轻重





《我依然把爱放在心上》



我依然把爱放在心上

依然恋你 甜美的微笑

撩人的话语 明亮的目光

它们展现在我面前

勾起我不尽的欲望

这些天我爱 我犹豫

有些痛 却幸福



我依然守着清贫 甚至固执

抓着书 恋着文字和爱

我懂得生活的艰难 也想喝奶

对明天我也想富足 恩爱



我知道 窗外的世界很精彩

我不鄙视铜臭 更向往真情

当岁月磨老了我们的容颜

我们闭目辞世时

心头仅存的 只有真情与爱
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PostPosted: 2007-12-16 23:12:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

抒情的
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PostPosted: 2007-12-19 20:46:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

一贯的真情流露。
似乎比以前的见洗炼,有力。很好。
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