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年夜饭

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-31 13:42:25 Post subject: 年夜饭

年夜饭木鱼, 青灯一群人集体喊冷把自己封冻成阳春白雪退缩在一片未经开垦的处女地为捉到几只新奇的蚊子欢呼久不沾荤腥的磁盘终于有了血色耐不住饥饿的她隐身出门隐身于下里巴人的年夜饭梅菜扣肉兰花香干回首瞅一眼天上的铜镜纤细的腰肢丰满了一只成熟的苹果

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-12-31 13:51:06 Post subject:

这故事值得解读，好像一个道姑（我不认识修女）之类的跑到民间。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-31 13:56:41 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

这故事值得解读，好像一个道姑（我不认识修女）之类的跑到民间。

冲浪, 这道姑是你诗M. Wink

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-12-31 14:23:58 Post subject:

我赶紧去做饭 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-31 14:47:57 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

我赶紧去做饭

要作梅菜扣肉哦. 悄悄告诉你, XIAOMING烧的梅菜扣肉特好吃. 那些窈宨淑女般的诗妹妹们, 一改维持多年不沾肥肉的老习惯, 大吃特吃.比我这DSG还厉害, 谁都顾不上好身材了 Wink

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-12-31 20:06:03 Post subject:

诗有现代味。既写实，又灵动且风趣。有那么多诗妹，可惜我不在场！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2008-01-02 03:06:32 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

诗有现代味。既写实，又灵动且风趣。

有那么多诗妹，可惜我不在场！

谢谢道模, 下次一定叫你.问好新年 Very Happy

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-02 10:58:04 Post subject:

有新意~一定很好吃哈!新年快乐!

山城子
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Posted: 2008-01-02 19:59:12 Post subject:

耐读的好诗！——属于阳春白雪！ ——我却愿意陪着青灯寂寞！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-01-02 22:32:11 Post subject:

瞅一眼天上的铜镜纤细的腰肢丰满了一只成熟的苹果 ——很美的句子，欢快愉悦的心境！（另：很想学学那梅菜扣肉的做法）

杨海军
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Posted: 2008-01-03 10:37:34 Post subject:

喜欢白水兄这首诗！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-03 16:23:23 Post subject:

月亮, 山城子老师, 荷梦, 海军谢谢你们的鼓励.

子花
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Posted: 2008-01-03 17:27:47 Post subject:

年夜饭居然能写成这样！！欣赏~~~

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-04 12:35:31 Post subject:

子花 wrote:

年夜饭居然能写成这样！！欣赏~~~

谢谢子花.

黑雨滴
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Posted: 2008-01-04 13:42:13 Post subject:

问好 _________________ 个人主页：http://blog.sina.com.cn/afirewang

中国湖北:文胜
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Posted: 2008-01-04 14:24:43 Post subject:

呵呵，别具一格 _________________ 无他。爱诗，仅此。诗心、歌爱、走路。足矣！个人网站http://blog.sina.com.cn/ak5hmwz79sytbd0d

里太白
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Posted: 2008-01-04 14:56:42 Post subject:

三个蚊子一盘菜。三个诗人把锅摔坏。 _________________ 白天白想晚上瞎想；想来想去，不能不想

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-04 15:32:37 Post subject:

黑雨滴 wrote:

问好

新年好.

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-04 15:34:27 Post subject:

中国湖北:文胜 wrote:

呵呵，别具一格

是啊, 朋友也说我这首诗歌不同我以往风格. Razz

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-04 15:35:40 Post subject:

里太白 wrote:

三个蚊子一盘菜。三个诗人把锅摔坏。

别摔锅, 生活是第一位的. 问好太白诗人. Very Happy

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