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Posted: 2007-11-20 22:22:04 Post subject: 《1７》　勿妄言　报到!

1７号学员报到,找不到地方 http://hi.baidu.com/%C7%BE%DE%B1%D2%A1%D2%B7 _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-11-20 23:00:22 Post subject: Re: 16号报到!

勿妄言 wrote:

16号学员报到,找不到地方 Crying or Very sad

http://hi.baidu.com/%C7%BE%DE%B1%D2%A1%D2%B7

热烈欢迎四川辣女人：）

《16》号，每个新人来，你都帮我备好茶点饭菜哟。。。

帅哥有几、美酒不可少，美女都要鲜花哈哈

《16》是物流军需金钢也！！

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Posted: 2007-11-20 23:10:37 Post subject:

俺是美女，不是金缸 _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-11-21 00:56:02 Post subject:

。四川辣美媚 . _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-11-21 01:10:42 Post subject:

哈哈，太漂亮了，谢谢kokho _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-11-21 06:34:09 Post subject:

。辣妹赶快帮忙招呼：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-11-21 09:35:30 Post subject:

勿妄言成了 16号啦再次欢迎哦 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-11-21 20:19:41 Post subject:

诗辣吾忘言。说过了，咱老家的最美，你的诗应该最好。单就笔名来推断。偶妄言了。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2007-11-21 21:02:36 Post subject:

_________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-11-22 19:13:48 Post subject:

偶的花花被谁偷了? _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-11-22 19:18:33 Post subject:

谁见过偷花大盗 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-11-22 19:24:31 Post subject:

岛兄帮偶找回来啊,不喜欢这一缸水 _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-11-22 19:34:17 Post subject:

找了一朵菊花不知道你喜欢不 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-11-22 21:49:40 Post subject:

传说是今天开学，老师到哪里去泡MM了 _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-11-23 05:39:33 Post subject:

余光中的成名诗大概是这个吧) 乡愁小时候乡愁是一枚小小的邮票我在这头母亲在那头长大后乡愁是一张窄窄的船票我在这头新娘在那头后来啊乡愁是一方矮矮的坟墓我在外头母亲在里头而现在乡愁是一湾浅浅的海峡我在这头大陆在那头晕!这首诗我很早就读过,居然不知道作者是余光中,巨汗~~~~ 评论之一作者孙宇) 提起台湾著名作家诗人余光中，人们最难以忘怀的诗作就是他的那首《乡愁》了。“小时候，乡愁是一枚小小邮票；我在这头，母亲在那头；长大后，乡愁是一张窄窄的船票；我在这头，新娘在那头；后来呵，乡愁是一方矮矮的坟墓；我在外头，母亲在里头；而现在乡愁是一湾浅浅的海峡，我在这头，大陆在那头” 。诗中充溢着浓郁的乡情和亲情，反映了台湾同胞长期隔绝于祖国大家庭的彷徨和苦闷，渴望结束民族分裂的悲剧的真挚情感。怀乡思亲曾是台湾诗坛最流行的主题之一，诗人也被称为最有影响的乡愁诗人之一。 _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-11-23 06:03:16 Post subject:

星之葬作者：余光中浅蓝色的夜溢进窗来夏斟得太满萤火虫的小宫灯做着梦梦见唐宫梦见追逐的轻罗小扇梦见另一个夏夜一颗星的葬礼梦见一闪光的伸延与消灭以及你的惊呼我的回顾和片刻的愀然无语没找到相关评论文章 _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-11-24 15:09:46 Post subject:

。做得好：）乡愁的评论呢。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-11-25 07:45:23 Post subject:

菊之殇空洞的夜色盛满秋凉雨斟进孤樽秋菊低垂慵懒发梢轻诉伊人清瘦淅沥声拍打着窗棂记得同一个雨夜一枝菊瓣的跌落跌落在暧昧的馨香里飘落的声音凄厉疼痛的滋味让夜色凛然寒战。 _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-11-25 08:19:26 Post subject:

。乡愁的评论找不到的话，你自己也可以评论呀。。你可以从台湾人，和大陆人在这首诗发表的时候；有何不同的看法谈起：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-11-25 08:21:41 Post subject:

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菊之殇

空洞的夜色盛满秋凉雨斟进孤樽
秋菊低垂慵懒发梢轻诉
伊人清瘦淅沥声拍打着窗棂

记得同一个雨夜一枝菊瓣的跌落
跌落在暧昧的馨香里
飘落的声音凄厉疼痛的滋味让夜色凛然寒战

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这是那个菊花图的题图诗吗？

写得很好。。。改天讨论。。
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